Friday, October 31, 2014

Carr First Response

Finney 1

Jill Finney

RWS 100

Mr. Werry

31 October 2014

RWS Carr Claims

Overall Argument: Thanks to the ubiquity of text on the Internet, not to mention the popularity of text-messaging on cell phones, we may well be reading more today than we did in the 1970s or 1980s, when television was our medium of choice. But it’s a different kind of reading, and behind it lies a different kind of thinking—perhaps even a new sense of the self.


Carr discusses the overall argument and supports it through expert testimonies, examples, and historical examples.  Carr is able to organize, and frame the issue in a way that the audience can understand. Additionally, his use of repetition throughout the article contributes to the audiences view and understanding of the subject as well.

Monday, October 20, 2014

Carey Rough Draft

Finney 1
Jill Finney
RWS 100
Mr. Werry
20 October 2014
Carey Paper
            Non-Profit versus For-Profit education has been a central debate for some years now. Kevin Carey is a policy director of the Education Sector at New America as well as an expert on PreK-12 and higher education issues.  Carey continuously researches higher education reforms, how to improve graduation rates, online education, and more. His articles are often seen published in The New York Times, Washington Monthly, and The Chronicle Of Higher Education.  A man with research and background in education, Carey addresses the debate between For-Profit and Non-Profit schooling in his article titled, “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profit Colleges?”.  Carey’s central claim of the paper is as follows, “While problems exist, and some new regulation is warranted, for profits have an important place in higher education as they are innovative, help students ignored by traditional institutions and are here to stay.” According to Carey, despite all the argumentation surrounding for profit education it provides several benefits to its students. Any education has holes, cracks, or faults and that is what Carey goes over in his paper. In my own analysis of Carey’s paper I will examine the claims regarding benefits of for-profit education and schooling and extend, challenge, complicate them with other credible accounts and sources.
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            One of Carey’s main claims in the article was that the for-profit sector isn’t necessarily bad; the reputable parts are valuable as they drive technological and organizational innovation. Carey acknowledges that, “Horror stories of aggressive recruiters’ inducing students to take out huge loans for nearly worthless degrees are filling the news”. The media will do anything it can to attack the business setting of for profit corporations around the country.  However, through the acknowledgement that yes, horror stories do occur in the for-profit education world, this does not and should not define the system. All schools have faults or small holes in education and Carey supports this argument through the regional accreditation standard as he states in paragraph 14. Traditional institutions are flawed and hypocritical in their criticisms. He says of traditional institutions, “They’ve [traditional institutions] pointed instead to regional accreditation, which conveniently allows colleges to decide for themselves whether they’re doing a good job.” If traditional institutions are in charge of reporting how they are doing, wouldn’t they report outstanding feedback? Looking deeper, “we cannot determine measurements of academic quality…accreditation is meaningless and can be bought”. According to Carey, “for profits fill a void left by traditional institutions… fast developing methods of teaching students over the Internet have given the velocity of change a turbo boost.” Michael Seiden extends Carey’s claim of non-profit education benefits through personal testimonies in the article “For-Profit Colleges Deserve Some Respect” from The Chronicle of Higher Education.  Seiden is a retired president of Western National University,
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and supports Carey’s claim of innovation through his words from working many years in the non profit education world, “...innovation has been their [for-profit institutions] hallmark, and they have led the way- from the early days when accelerated courses and evening classes attracted adult learners…to the explosion of distance learning through online courses”.  This example supports the ease of for profit education as well as outlines the role that technology has played in benefiting many people enrolled in any of the for profit corporations. In relation to Carey’s claim the idea from Seiden’s article connects to emphasize the benefits of for profit educations. From Seiden’s perspective for profits have “several positive aspects” and include a “focus on quality assurance”, which provides a justified extension of Carey’s claim that “for-profit higher education is not inherently bad”.
            One of the next claims made by Kevin Carey is a counter to the benefits of for profit corporations. Instead Carey contradicts the benefits as a way to connect with the audience from both perspectives. Problems and abuses do exist in the for profit sector of education, unfortunately many operators refuse to admit this. Carey addresses that yes, “for profits make most of their money from the federal government”. In fact he further supports this statement through the evidence from the University of Phoenix, “Phoenix alone is on to reap $1 billion from Pell Grants this year, along with $4 billion from federal loans”.  Although Carey first addressed a major benefit of for profit education, the audience can now see him here weighing rebutter’s point of view.  Holly Petreaus proposes an additional
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argument in the article “For-Profit Colleges, Vulnerable G.I.’s,” from the New York Times that generalizes with the money argument of Carey. Petreaus, an assistant director of service member affairs at the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau,
suggests that for-profit schools see service members as, “nothing more than dollar signs in uniform”. Essentially Petreaus is criticizing the for profit system for using these military veterans as bait to their often long harsh consequences. Pointing out the unethical ways that for profits recruit students she cites, “As the PBS program “Frontline” reported, the recruiter signed up Marines with serious brain injuries. The fact that some of them [military students] couldn’t remember what courses they were taking was immaterial, as long as they signed the dotted line.” This shocking evidence proves the cold hearted business of corporations in the for profit world. They are simply willing to do anything as long as they receive money. This generalization includes but is not limited to, University of Phoenix, Chapman University, DeVry, and Grand Canyon University. Furthermore statistics are used to present a sound conclusion to how much for profits are receiving from just the military alone. According to the article, “between 2006 and 2010, the money received in military education benefits by just 20 for profit companies soared to an estimated $521.2 million from $66.6 million”.  From just 20 for profit companies, the use of language by Petreaus through saying “companies” rather than “schools” portrays just how the minds of owners of for profits work… as a businessman or businesswoman.  I would like to point out that the argument put forth in Holly Petreaus’s article presents a different level of
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cruelty than that of Carey’s position. While Carey just touches the surface of money and how much universities are received yearly, Petreaus looks into where its coming from and delivers an answer that claims majority is derived from military students that are preyed upon.
            Going back to Careys original article, “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profit Colleges?” he makes a final claim that for-profits “exist to fix educational market failures”.  Universities such as Phoenix, Chapman, Grand Canyon, and DeVry, serve ”students traditional students often ignore”. To support himself Carey notes that Kaplan “provides courses that bankrupt colleges cannot” as well as American Public University that teaches Wal-Mart employees.  To extend this claim, professors of Harvard University published a study titled “For Profit Colleges” The Future of Children. Utilizing statistics in the article done by David Deming, Claudia Goldin, and Lawrence Katz, they write, “For-Profit colleges were responsible for nearly 30 percent of the total growth in postsecondary enrollment and degrees awarded in the first decade of the twentieth century”. Despite the sluggish growth of state funding, these professors propose that for-profit education has grown significantly to the point that 30 percent of people graduate from them. To elaborate on Carey’s claim furthermore, “For Profit Colleges” article states “for profit colleges also enroll a more disadvantaged group of beginning undergraduates than do other postsecondary schools”. As a reader, it is clear that Careys article is extended through the additional claims of the “For-Profit Colleges” article. While Carey states and makes claims regarding how for
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profits serve a different community that is often ignored, the outside article addresses the same concerns as well as numbers to describe how many people have been successful with the for profit system. By investigating the claims of Carey and comparing them to this outside article the base of evidence remains solid and credible to any readers. In both of these articles it is shown how majority of people are wrong to think that for profits will be going away anytime soon.
            Through the analysis and examination of the many claims in Carey’s article, I was able to discover the different claims, meanings of those claims, and how those claims can be extended or complicated through outside sources.  This overall debate between the for profit school system and the non profit schooling system was, prior to researching for this paper, new to my learning. As a college student, school is everything. The next step to the big future ahead of you, a time when one wants to receive the maximum bang for their buck. In this case as well as every other college kid, the best education with the least holes and consequences to follow. After researching the topic and reading over the benefits of both schools (non profit and for profit) through Carey and the multiple outside sources I was able to utilize I found a conclusion to my ultimate position. School is school, and like Carey pointed out every school, degree, education experience, is going to have flaws. There is absolutely no perfect system that is 100% of the time going to leave a student with a degree and zero debt to pay off. Money to pay off after your education is absolutely inevitable. Therefore, in my stance, after
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seeing all sides of this great debate, I believe that no matter what you choose non-profit or for profit, you will receive the education that is necessary. Whether you need the flexible hours and night time classes, or are stuck in  a dorm to go every single day, education is the key to success and both types of institutions provide valid educations.

           
           
           



Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Prospectus

Jill Finney      

RWS 100

Mr. Werry

15 October 2014
Prospectus

David Deming, Claudia Goldin, and Lawrence Katz. “For-Profit Colleges” The Future Of Children. Vol. 23/No. 1/Spring 2013 ; 5 pages

Done by Harvard students and Professors, we can look at the extension of Carey’s arguments. In this reading it can be shown that For-Profits can provide benefits to the students that attend them rather than the horror stories most often heard about.

“In the face of sluggish growth to state funding for public institutions, for-profit colleges have grown  rapidly to meet demand and have taken advantage of expanded federal student aid.”

“Finely attuned to the marketplace, the for-profits are quick to open new schools, hire faculty, and add programs that train students for jobs in fast-growing areas such as healthcare and informational technology.”

“…programs of short duration that prepare students for a specific occupation. But the for-profit completion rates, default rates, and labor market outcomes for students seeking associate’s or higher degrees…..”


Holly Petreaus. “For-Profit Colleges, Vulnerable G.I.’s” from The New York Times, 09/21/2011. Magazine Article. 2 pages.

Although this article is relatively short, it provides insight into the corruption of For-Profit schools, specifically looking towards military veterans. According to Petreaus, military vets looking to return to school often are preyed upon by for-profit universities throughout the nation.

“This gives for-profit colleges an incentive to see service members as nothing more than dollar signs in uniform, and to use aggressive marketing to draw them in and take out private loans, which students often need because federal grants are insufficient to cover the full cost of tuition and related expenses.”


“…compared with other schools, for-profit colleges generally have low graduation rates and a poor record of gainful employment for their alumni. A number of non-profit colleges have questionable academic credentials or lack accreditation accepted by other institutions.”

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

October 8th HW

Finney 1

Jill Finney      

RWS 100

Mr. Werry

08 October 2014

October 8th HW Assignment

Identify an element of each text that extends, complicates, challenges, qualifies or illustrates a claim or piece of evidence from Carey.
From “For-Profit Colleges Deserve Some Respect” by Michael J. Seiden
-       Challenges the Non Profit v Profit Debate
“There have been unquestionably been abuses in some for-profit education institutions, but the same can be said about private and public institutions as well. Perhaps its time to evaluate institutions on their own merits, rather than classify them by stereotypical categories.”
From “For-Profit Colleges, Vulnerable G.I.’s” by Holly Perteaus
-       Extension of 90/10 Argument
“This gives the for-profit colleges an incentive to see service members as nothing but dollar signs in uniform, and to use aggressive marketing to draw them in and take out private loans, which students often need because the federal grants are insufficient to cover the full cost of tuition and related expenses. “

Find a quote from one or two comments that extends, complicates, challenges or illustrates a claim or piece of evidence in Carey.
-       Complicating the argument, an edmc worker states

After several years of observation I believe that most students would be better served in enrolling and graduating from community colleges prior to enrolling in a for-profit school. It is true that many for-profits provide meaningful hands on learning by practitioners in the field, too often the chosen fields are saturated with workers and the placement criteria are stretched to the breaking point and beyond”

Sunday, October 5, 2014

RWS HW October 4th

Homework October 6th

List the three main claims of Carey gives in the first half of the text suggesting there are problems with for-profit universities; and kinds of evidence provided for each claim.
·      Unfortunately, a large and growing number of graduates of for-profit colleges are having trouble paying those loans back.
- Current Events, examples
·      Without oversight, the combination of government subsidies and financially unsophisticated consumers guarantees outright fraud or programs that, while technically legitimate, are so substandard that the distinction of legitimacy has no meaning.
- Personal Anecdotes, Interviews, Examples
·      As a rule, for-profits charge much more than public colleges and universities.
- Statistics, Expert Testimonies, Current Events
List the three main claims Carey gives in the second half of the text suggesting public universities have caused many of the problems for profits seek to remedy.
·      For-profits exist in large part to fix educational market failures left by traditional institutions, and they profit by serving students that public and private nonprofit institutions too often ignore.
- Examples, Current Events, Expert Testimonies
·      Traditional institutions tend to respond to such ventures by indicting the quality of for profit degrees.
- Examples, Expert Testimonies
·      For profits fill a void left by traditional institutions that once believed their world was constant.
- Current Events, Examples
List one element of Carey’s text you would like to investigate- a claim, some evidence, a strategy, etc.

·      The for profit Kaplan University recently struck a deal with the California community-college system to provide courses that the bankrupt public colleges cannot.